Monday 9 December 2013

Personal Additions/ What I want for Christmas

1. lifesize teddy bear
2.juicy couture sweater
3.chanel earrings
4. real uggs
5. black matte nail polish
6. gel nails
7. my family to get along this christmas lol

Personal Additions/ Writing

I found this on tumblr and I think it is worthy of sharing because it has taught me some things about writing that I never thought about. I learned that prepositions are not words to end sentences with. Also to avoid cliches and to be consistent.

Wednesday 4 December 2013

Personal Additions/top 5 favourite albums

1. Mac Miller - delusional thomas
2. Tyler the creator - Wolf
3. Britney Spears - Britney Jean
4. Katy Perry - Prism
5. Drake - Nothing was the same

Reading Assignment #6/Character POV- Creating Conversations

Book: Tuesdays with Morrie
Author: Mitch Albom
Pages read: 199

1.Morrie @Morrie
everyone is invited to my living funeral so I get to hear all the wonderful things you would say about me!
#loveyou #excited

2.Morrie @Morrie
I am not ashamed of dying I will not wither instead I will make do with the time I have left #live

3.Morrie @Morrie
I have no more privacy in my life #KnewItWasGoingToHappen

4.Morrie @Morrie
If you really want something in life then you'll make your dream happen #believeinyourself

5.Mitch @Mitch
I will miss Morrie but I still remember the last time he talked to me #HeWontBeForgotten

6.Morrie @Morrie
You need to make room for spiritual things in your life which means things that are materialistic #LovedOnes

7.Rob @Rob
everyone that has ALS, I hope they can find the healing power in grieving #BeStrong

8.Morrie @Morrie
Remember to love each other or perish, without love we are birds with broken wings #truth

9.Morrie @Morrie
If you want the experience of having responsibility for another human being and learn how to love in the deepest way, have children #soft

10.Mitch @Mitch
I wish I could have a stronger relationship with my brother #hurt

11. Mitch @Mitch
I feel ashamed, I brought hard food to Morrie's house and he can't have any #DidntKnow

12.Mitch @Mitch
I'm scared of Morrie dying in front of me #OneOfMyBiggestFears

13.Mitch @Mitch
I look foward to seeing Morrie on Tuesday #EveryTuesdayIseeMorrie

14.Morrie @Morrie
Music makes me cry when I think about it deeply #ItsBeautiful

15.Morrie @Morrie
The most important thing about marriage is your belief in the importance of your marriage #important

16.Morrie @Morrie
People are only mean when you threaten them #simple

17.Morrie @Morrie
Don't believe what our culture tells you to believe #AllALie

18.Morrie @Morrie
I'm bargaining with Him up there now. I'm asking Him, " Do I get to be one of the angels?" #praying

19.Morrie @Morrie
This disease may be knocking my spirit but it will not get my spirit, it will get my body #StayingPositive

20.Morrie@Morrie
Be compassionate and take responsibility for each other #WorldWouldBeABetterPlace

21.Morrie @Morrie
Forgive yourself before you die then forgive others #lessonlearned

22.Morrie @Morrie
Forgive yourself then forgive others while you are young don't wait #DoItNow

23.Morrie @Morrie
I mourn my dwindling time, but I cherish the chance it gives me to make things right #ThanksGod

24.Morrie@Morrie
If I could have another son, I would like it to be Mitch #lovehim

25.Morrie @Morrie
Giving to other people is what makes me feel alive #NothingElse




Sunday 1 December 2013

Personal Additions/Snowmobiling and Tobogganing

In the winter I enjoy snowmobiling and tobogganing in my spare time even though I don't snowmobile as much as I would like to. I only get to snowmobile when I go to my cousins house which is like about four to five times a year. Even though you have to put on lots of warm clothing and your face feels like its about to fall off after you snowmobile it's all worth it in the ending. I go tobogganing usually on the Wood haven hill with my family or friends then have hot chocolate after and it's always a great time. :)


Thinking about dialogue

1. i. Where did you go?
Chelsea and I orginally went in the office to eavesdrop on the students that came in the office but then we went back to the classroom and I started eavesdropping just a small conversation in the classroom.

ii. How long did you listen to the conversation?
I listened and recorded the conversation for about around ten to fifteen minutes.

iii. Who was it between?
The conversation started between just three students in the classroom then it became more students and even the teacher involved.

iii. How did it feel to be recording the conversation?
I felt weird and rebellious because I felt like it wasn't right to be eavesdropping on the conversation. I also felt this way because I found some of the conversation a bit personal.

2. What insights did you gain about the way people speak?
The insights I gained about the way people speak are that some people say certain words a lot like "like" and every person has a different word that they say a lot. I learned that some people speak with more confidence then others while some people are kind of uncertain about what they are saying. I learned that with some people you can't really tell if they are being sarcastic or not. I also learned that some people talk over people and speak a lot louder then other people. I learned that some people speak faster then other people making it harder to understand what they are saying.

3. How can you apply this to your writing?
I can apply this to my writing by when I'm talking about someone that is speaking I could be more descriptive on how they are saying it. If they are saying it quickly, loud, over people or with confidence etc. I can also apply this to my writing by giving characters more personality just with how they communicate with people by describing that very throughly. I can also apply this to my writing by adding something like writing that this person interrupted the conversation and going more in depth on how this conversation is going.

4. How is personality and character revealed through conversation/dialogue?
You can tell that personality and character is revealed through conversation/dialogue because if someone interrupts someone in a conversation they could come off as being rude. You can also tell by someones voice what mood they are in or if they are saying it quietly they could come off as being a very shy person. On the other hand, if a person is talking very loudly they could come off as being very confident.

5. What happens when more then two people participate in a conversation?
When more then two people participate in a conversation, people tend to interrupt other people or speak over people. When more then two people participate in a conversation, it's also harder to understand what people are saying and record them when you are eavesdropping. When more then two people participate in a conversation it's also harder for the people in the conversation to give everyone in that conversation equal attention.

6. What's the most surprising thing you've  learned about the way people converse?
The most surprising thing I have learned about the way people converse is that how much you can learn about a person's personality and character just only from fifteen minutes of eavesdropping into their conversation with their friends.

7. What are the differences and similarities between written and spoken conversations?
The differences between written and spoken conversations are that in spoken conversations people interrupt one another a lot and in written authors don't usually describe every time someone interrupts someone or the tone they use every time. The similarities between written and spoken conversations is that they both reveal the character in the person and their personality.